Drafts: 4 submitted - all quite good.
Draft 4 is the best so far I think
- You need to put a graphic behind your masthead, as the 'dotty' font is
nice but gets a bit lost amongst the newspaper background. Also, consider making
the masthead a bit 'deeper' - as it's supposed to occupy roughly 1/5 of the
page.
- Consider adding a teasing contents graphic along the bottom of your page
(behind the 'the only . . .').
- Your barcode needs some work in order to make it look professional. Move
it further to the right and add the date and price.
- The cover lines are in urgent need of some attention. They don't work on a
slant underneath Sabrina. You might have to consider using semi-opaque graphics
behind every bit of text because of the background.
My Response to Feedback:
I am willing to make improvements in order for my magazine to look better. I will change the layout around and add semi-opaque graphics behind most of the text, as I understand that it doesn't stand out because of the newspaper background. I will also make my masthead much bigger because now that I look at it from a different perspective, I can see that it's too small and doesn't stand out because of the background.
My Response to Feedback:
I am willing to make improvements in order for my magazine to look better. I will change the layout around and add semi-opaque graphics behind most of the text, as I understand that it doesn't stand out because of the newspaper background. I will also make my masthead much bigger because now that I look at it from a different perspective, I can see that it's too small and doesn't stand out because of the background.
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